FICTION
Punjabi Literature / Punjabi Fiction
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The Workshop
— SHORT STORY by
Rashid Javed Ahmed
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An amazing story of a mender. He has magic in his hands to repair damaged things like new ones. One day, he was assigned the most arduous and bizarre task.
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The sign board of yellow lettering on blue background, fixed overhead the entrance of that 3-yard by 5-yard workshop, read: Hafiz Mubarak Ali — Electrician; Mechanic; Engineer.
It was a cramped room where all kinds of damaged things were mended. Half of the workshop was concealed by a thick cloth curtain, revealing only a portion of the interior. Bhola — the vegetable seller — had once glimpsed the curtain hidden portion, but he was unwilling to speak of it. He had only exposed that he had seen… a great deal… but he couldn’t remember what he had seen. Some people were astonished, while others laughed. On such occasions, Hafiz Mubarak Ali would circle a finger around his head, implying that Bhola had lost his mind. Some people in the neighbourhood, however, believed the hidden part contained the same tools as the front.
The visible section held two or three types of hammers; saws for cutting iron and wood; a bundle of old rags; wax; some adhesive solutions; a few cutters; a kerosene stove; and numerous other small and large tools. Although, on the inner wall hung a very feeble light bulb, yet Hafiz turned it carefully at the time of the Maghrib prayer.
The repair work in this workshop was satisfactory. Everything was fixed: from genuine and imitation jewellery to shoe soles and punctured tubes; from the bent and twisted spokes of bicycles. When Hafiz returned a mended item to a customer; their eyes would shine, and they would be forced to wonder if the item had even needed repair in the first place. It was as if Hafiz had created a copy of the original.
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He was a taciturn and reserved man. A strange mystique seemed to cling to him. He didn’t care for personal questions, yet he would laugh off such inquiries, asking the customer what they had brought for repair.
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Though Hafiz lived in that vicinity, but no one could say for certain where he had come from. When people asked, he evaded the question, saying, “Where I am, from there I am… I am here; so I am from here.” Nonetheless, his accent suggested he was from somewhere in the Potohar region. Moreover, he was a taciturn and reserved man. However, a strange mystique seemed to cling to him. Although he didn’t care for personal questions, yet he laughed off such inquiries, asking the customer what they had brought for repair.
One day, Shanoo, the brick kiln worker, came to Hafiz holding a plastic bottle. He said humbly, “Hafiz Sahib… I used to take cold water to the kilns in this bottle, but some bricks fell on it. It’s useless now. My friend, look at it and fix it. I can’t afford a new one.” Hafiz examined the bottle carefully, then asked Shanoo to wait outside and went behind the curtain. The bottle may have once held expensive water, but Shanoo had bought it from a scrap dealer for ten rupees. For a daily-wage labourer like him, it was as precious as an ocean. Now it was broken.
Hafiz worked on the bottle behind the curtain for a while, and then reappeared with the repaired item. Shanoo was dozing by the workshop door. Hafiz waved the bottle in the air and said, ‘’I’ve been standing here waiting for you, and you’re fast asleep. Here, take your bottle.’’ Shanoo looked at the bottle with half-open eyes, which instantly widened in astonishment. The hole in the middle was gone. There was no trace of repair. He quickly filled the bottle from the tap outside the grocery store and turned it upside down; not a single drop fell out.
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Damaged items, broken utensils, malfunctioning electrical appliances, and children’s toys — everything found its way to Hafiz’s workshop and, through hard work and honesty, was restored to a state close to its original.
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Overjoyed, Shanoo exclaimed, “Brother Mubarak, you fixed such a difficult thing so easily! Bhola once told me that when you go behind the curtain, a blue-black light emanates from your body… He said a lot more, but we just laughed it off. But now, I’m convinced; there’s something within you.”
Hafiz Mubarak Ali let out a hearty laugh, raised both hands, and said, “This is all from my hands and from my Master. These hands are strong; they can fix anything.”
“You are right, Sahib,” Shanoo said. “But is it just the strength of your hands? Tell me the truth, Brother Mubarak. Is there some jinn; some magician; or something else inside you?” Hafiz laughed again and said, “Brother, I earn my living by hard work. And, I don’t take alms from anyone, that’s all. Look, in our country, millions of poor people live. Only a rare few are fortunate enough to buy something new every day. The rest can only get their broken things repaired. So, I am here.”
The point was valid. Until now, Hafiz had never asked for anything beyond the payment for his labour. Damaged items, broken utensils, malfunctioning electrical appliances, and children’s toys — everything found its way to Hafiz’s workshop and, through hard work and honesty, was restored to a state close to its original. People sometimes called him “Murramat Ali”. Even though, he didn’t like the name, but he knew they gave him work, the source of his livelihood. It didn’t behoove him to resent such things.
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Though Hafiz lived in that vicinity, but no one could say for certain where he had come from. When people asked, he evaded the question, saying, “Where I’m, from there I’m… I’m here; so I’m from here.” Nonetheless, his accent suggested he was from somewhere in the Potohar region. Moreover, he was a taciturn and reserved man. However, a strange mystique seemed to cling to him. Although he didn’t care for personal questions, yet he laughed off such inquiries, asking the customer for their items to repair.
One day, Shanoo, the brick kiln worker, came to Hafiz holding a plastic bottle. He said humbly, “Hafiz Sahib… I used to take cold water to the kilns in this bottle, but some bricks fell on it. It’s useless now. My friend, look at it and fix it. I can’t afford a new one.” Hafiz examined the bottle carefully, then asked Shanoo to wait outside and went behind the curtain. The bottle may have once held expensive water, but Shanoo had bought it from a scrap dealer for ten rupees. For a daily-wage labourer like him, it was as precious as an ocean. Now it was broken.
Hafiz worked on the bottle behind the curtain for a while, and then reappeared with the repaired item. Shanoo was dozing by the workshop door. Hafiz waved the bottle in the air and said, ‘’I’ve been standing here waiting for you, and you’re fast asleep. Here, take your bottle.’’ Shanoo looked at the bottle with squinted eyes, which instantly widened in astonishment. The hole in the middle was gone. There was no trace of repair. He quickly filled the bottle from the tap outside the grocery store to turn it upside down; not a single drop fell out.
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The girl was still standing there; her eyes filled with the distress of rejection. Hafiz took pity on her. He called her back; took the doll, and told her to bring ten rupees the next day.
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“What do you want?” Hafiz asked, impatiently.
“Uncle! My doll broke. Will you repair it?” The girl said, showing a doll hidden under her shawl.
“A doll… yours…?”
“Yes. I was playing. It fell from my hands from the second floor… and it broke.”
“Look, child. I’m not free right now. I can’t repair dolls. Send your father with it tomorrow.”
As Hafiz turned to go inside, she spoke again.
“I’ve come here covertly. My father doesn’t let me go out. He says the times are very bad.”
“If the times are bad, then what can I do? I have no time at all. My own bad times are enough for me. Come tomorrow.” Hafiz said, going behind the curtain. But, out of habit, he peeked through a crack in the door. The girl was still standing there; her eyes filled with the distress of rejection. Hafiz took pity on her. Hence, he called her back; took the doll, and told her to bring ten rupees the next day. Overjoyed, the girl couldn’t speak and ran towards her home. Just then, Hafiz noticed two men on motorcycles looking towards his shop. It seemed either their bikes had broken down or they had run out of petrol. “If they need something, they’ll come,” Hafiz thought and returned to his work. The girl’s doll, made of china, had shattered into three pieces.
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She was covered from head to toe as before, but strands of her hair escaped the shawl, curling on her forehead. Hafiz brought out the doll and handed it over to the girl.
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The next day, Mian Sahib was the first to arrive at his workshop. When he saw the repaired vase, he was so delighted that he kissed Hafiz’s hands. The vase was restored with such skill that no seam was visible. Therefore, pleased with his craftsmanship, Mian Sahib announced to give Hafiz the empty shop next to his house, rent-free. “Hafiz Sahib, this is not a good place. There’s an empty plot next to it, and you know what goes on here at night. So, move into the shop next to my house. And, no rent at all.” Mian Sahib said with apparent generosity. But Hafiz knew that Mian Sahib often forgot his promises, or even went back on them if needed. Thus, he merely took the agreed payment and put him off until tomorrow.
And, the second customer was the girl from the previous day. Since, she had come at the same time, but today her school uniform was visible beneath her shawl. Perhaps she had come after school yesterday as well. Hafiz had just sat in his chair to catch his breath when he saw her. She was covered from head to toe as before, but strands of her hair escaped the shawl, curling on her forehead. Hafiz brought out the doll and handed over it to the girl. The child examined the expertly repaired doll; thanked Hafiz, and pulled a five-rupee note from a fold of her shawl to give him.
“Hmm. It is only half the payment. We agreed on ten,” Hafiz said.
“I’ll bring the rest later. I don’t have any more. Because, my father doesn’t give me much money. He says the times are very bad.” The girl said in a single breath.
“Okay. What’s your name?”
“Bushra.”
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The place was now a heaven for thieves, gamblers, and drunkards who assembled there at night under the light of a government-installed bulb.
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“Alright, daughter Bushra. Forget the remaining money. Tell your parents to send me broken household items. People like us can’t afford new things, so we make do by repairing the old.”
“Uncle! My mother is no more. And, my father walks the streets selling essential goods; sometimes for cash; sometimes on credit… and I go to school.”
“Oh… you’re Talib the peddler’s daughter, aren’t you?” Hafiz asked, deriving link from the girl’s talk.
“Yes, yes. But please don’t tell my father about the damage and fixing of my doll. I must go now. The times are very bad.” The girl said, leaving.
Then, Hafiz went inside. But he came out again, hearing the sound of a motorcycle. Outside, he only saw the fading exhausted smoke. The times are really bad, Hafiz thought, sitting in his chair. Since, his workshop was in the last lane of the neighbourhood, right next to an empty plot cordoned off by a boundary wall. Although, the foundations were laid, but either the owner had died or moved away. Even, no heir ever came to claim it.
And, the place was now a heaven for thieves, gamblers, and drunkards who assembled there at night under the light of a government-installed bulb. As, fights often broke out, and though the local police were present, but they never let things escalate too far. Sometimes, the noise would wake Hafiz, but he would think, what was it to him? Because, every neighbourhood has such desolate, silent spots. Hafiz would lay down on his cot again, thinking these assorted things.
But, the sound of a motorcycle, heard in his sleep, kept waking him, though nothing of the sort was happening now. He didn’t know why that sound had lodged itself in his brain.
The next morning, when he was cleaning his teeth with a “miswak” near the public tap, he saw Mian Sahib. It is strange to see Mian Sahib at this hour; he should be at the market, Hafiz thought. Mian Sahib came straight to him and said, “Do you have any idea what has happened? That Bushra… Talib’s daughter… she didn’t return from school yesterday. And, Talib is very worried… Although, we’ve searched the whole neighbourhood, but there’s no trace of her. So, he’s crying; mourning.”
“But Mian Sahib, she seemed such a well-mannered girl. A decent; polite child… Could she have been abducted?”
“Hafiz Sahib, I know her, too. She’s a studious girl. Because, she used to study with my daughter; she even ate meals at our house.”
Hafiz was at a loss for words. Just two days ago she had come to get her doll repaired, and today came the news of her disappearance. Even, he couldn’t focus on his work at all that day. For the first time, he turned away people with appointments, apologizing. He couldn’t comprehend it. Rumours were flying from all directions: the police were interrogating Talib instead. What was the girl’s character like? Did she have any friends? Where did she go? Did she always late come home from school? What kind of attitude did her father have with her? Whether authoritative or polite? Was she happy at home? Had someone battered her, and then…? When Hafiz heard all these queries, he felt deeply saddened. Hence, he closed the workshop and lay down on his cot inside. But, the sleep was far from his eyes.
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“No, brother. Do something. Fix her… She came to you two days ago to get her doll repaired… She asked for five rupees, and I found out… I told her to go to school, that I would pay you myself… You fixed her doll… This is my doll… Fix this one too…
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He didn’t know what time of night it was when a knock came at his workshop door. Half-asleep, Hafiz jumped out of his cot. As the darkness was so deep; he couldn’t guess the hour. Outside, someone was calling his name desperately. The voice held a strange, agonized quality.
“Brother Mubarak! Open the door! I am in great trouble… I am in a bad way.”
Although, the night was pitch black, but the voice was familiar. Hafiz slid the bolt and looked out. Someone was sitting on the ground, wrapped in a shawl. The moment Hafiz opened the door, the man grabbed his feet.
“Hafiz Sahib! Save my daughter… save her… I am Talib. Bushra’s father… I’ve brought her to you…”
Hafiz’s sturdy figure was just visible in the blackness of the night.
“Me…? How can I? What has happened? What are you saying? Let go of my feet.”
“No, brother. Please, do something. Please, fix her… She came to you two days ago to get her doll repaired… She asked for five rupees, and I found out… I told her to go to school, that I would pay you myself… You fixed her doll… And this is my doll… Fix this one, too, please… I’ll give you my two-room house… My bicycle is yours, too… Please, just fix my doll… As there is magic in your hands… This is my doll… This is my Bushra…”
“You… Have you brought Bushra?… Where is she?” Hafiz peered left and right into the darkness.
“Look over there. My life. My jewel. My girl. She’s lying by the wall.”
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He gathered his tools and set to work. As the darkness began to lessen slightly, Hafiz opened the workshop door. He led Talib inside; behind the curtain. Bushra was sitting propped against a support on the table.
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Hafiz rubbed his eyes as it was hard to see in the dark and moved towards the wall. His foot hit something. A sack lay before him, and Bushra was inside it. Her body was broken into three pieces; soaked in blood; still warm. He barely stopped his nausea and managed to ask when this had happened.
“Just now… just now… They came to my door. They called me out and said, ‘We have found your Bushra.’ Here, take her…’ And, they threw the sack on the ground and disappeared on their motorcycles, howling with laughter.
“Do you know them?” Hafiz asked.
“Only that one day, while selling my wares near Bushra’s school, I warned them not to catcall the girls” That’s all Talib could say. Hafiz helped him up; gave him water, and then carried the sack inside the workshop.
Whereas outside, in the silence and darkness of the night, whining of a dog came from somewhere far away. Now, Hafiz emptied the sack. But, he couldn’t comprehend anything. As the object given to him for repair today had shaken him to his core. Also, he wondered why he hadn’t confronted those boys that day. But he had never imagined something like this could happen. For some reason, he felt a strange sense of guilt, as if he were somehow complicit in this atrocity. However, he gathered his tools and set to work.
As the darkness began to diminish, Hafiz opened the workshop door. He led Talib inside; behind the curtain. Bushra was sitting propped against a support on the table. A wounded semblance of a smile seemed to play on her lips. Under a shawl stained with bloodspots, her body’s three broken pieces had been joined together to form a single shape.
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“Talib,” Hafiz said, “My friend, I could only fix your doll this much.” His voice choked in his throat.
But, in the afternoon of the third day — after the funeral — Hafiz Mubarak Ali bundled his belongings and tools into the curtain. Without telling anyone; without a word to anyone; he set off in an unknown direction and was never seen again.
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(Self-translation from PUNJABI)
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Rashid Javed Ahmed
Drama writer, critic and short story writer. Also, Rashid Javed Ahmed is a retired bank executive and lives in Lahore. He has published 2 books of short stories in Punjabi: “Mittee uttey leek”; and “Jungle uggi chup”. Moreover, he also published one collection of Urdu short stories: “Raf Raf Raftan”, and one book in English: “Fractured Silence”. Besides, he is also an editor an online magazine: www.penslipsmagazine.com
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