FICTION
Urdu Literature / Urdu Fiction
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A House Without Door
— SHORT STORY by
Khalid Fateh Muhammad
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The story offers you a chance to meet the Lilliputians of modern age. Although they were created in Gulliver’s Travels by Jonathan Swift in 1726 but the present age Lilliputians claim, “An author created us as his fantasy and then we became real. And, we started living.” And, “We are the future.” In nutshell, the story is a very subtle satire by the writer like Jonathan Swift. Khalid Fateh has crafted it adeptly. Not a missable piece of work.
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It was a solitary house outside the town.
It was not a sizeable town. A main shopping center and streets from different sides joining the shopping center and these streets had their own layout with a number of streets from sides joining and crossing each other. It was a semi urban town and people from rural areas kept visiting the town and lending a color to the drab life of the town by their high pitched conversations and laughter. Although the local people did not like their transgression but still bore with it because it was an economic advantage.
The people of the town believed in leading a secluded and uneventful life. And, they had made themselves self-sufficient. The architecture of an area in a particular age reflects the way of the life of people there. The living accommodations, apart from being attached with each other, were spacious enough to make them independent and cater for their needs themselves. As, they communicated with each other only for businesses, there were no collective funeral processions or marriage functions.
Moreover, they did not believe in spreading their family accommodations to other areas. But there was a house that was built on the outskirts of the town. Who had built the house? Since the people did not communicate with each other so they were not interested in who were the builders? Someone decided to check the documents and all formalities pertaining to the house were in order. Who had got this done, no one knew? But it stood there! And, the strange thing about the architectural design was that it had no door, windows or ventilators.
So, the design of the house intrigued everyone and it was a discussion in many a household. One day, an occupant of one of the houses decided to call on his neighbor. This was unheard of. Because never before none had knocked at the door of his any neighbor. So he went and knocked at the door of his neighbor. The man came out all fuming. Of course, they had seen each other many a time in main shopping center. All residents of the town had seen each other in main shopping center but they never conversed with each other. Thus, he was annoyed at being called to the door. Because, all their activities were confined to within the limits of their houses.
“I have come to discuss the house without a door.” he blurted out in embarrassment, watching his expression. He knew that he had broken a tradition. And, the town thrived on its traditions.
The man stared at the intruder for some time. “What is there to discuss?”
His reply was very brief and curt.
“Well, the house is standing there since years and no one is occupying it. This is against the tradition of the town. Who so ever builds a house, lives in it! This is what the tradition says.”
The man pondered a little, feeling his forehead time and again. “OK. What do you want, then?”
“We should collect a few people and go to the municipal committee office.”
“OK. What next?” There was a hint of aggression again. “It would be an exercise in futility.”
‘”Why?”
“Because I have already checked. All formalities are complete and there are no ambiguities.”
This shocked the man who had come to his neighbor. He considered himself to be the initiator of this exercise but others had taken a lead. But, he stood there waiting for the other man to further elaborate his view point. Then, he found the man shifting his feet to go back inside. But, he did not want to let go this opportunity.
“I was curious enough. And, I had the opportunity to visit the district headquarters a few times during last few years. One year there was no house and the next time it stood there wrapped in all its mystery. Since then I have been having a strange and an eerie sort of feeling. Who built this house? Why was it built? Why doesn’t it have any entrance? Why there aren’t any means of ventilation?”
The man was looking at him with least interest and then he abruptly turned round and went into his house. But, he stood there in a shock till he heard the door being bolted. He also returned to his house. He thought: the villagers who visit his town or the people of the city were an entirely different lot. They talked amongst themselves and laughed a lot. But, he had never laughed; no one in his house ever laughed. Was it appropriate to be cut off from each other?
When he returned, his family was siting all huddled together. They were all silent. He was reminded of his chickens to be cooped up before the sunset. As, they did not talk much amongst themselves so he realized they were also like the house without a door.
Now, he had a mind to summon a meeting of the elders of the town to unearth the mystery that shrouded the house without a door. How could anyone live in such a house and then survive? All the people of the town were educated. They had gone to the universities and there they were the only students who did not mingle with anyone; not even among themselves. Because, they were considered as outcasts though they always got good grades. Then, he pondered hard over the idea of calling a meeting of the elders. But finally, he decided against it because he knew the attitude of the people of the town.
Suddenly, an idea hit him to contact an old class fellow in the city. But, he hardly knew him except that they were fellows in master’s level class. And, he was a little different from the rest of the pack and never ridiculed him. In fact, he was a little sympathetic towards him. His favorite topics used to be history, cultures and civilizations. The town that the man lived in had a unique history; its uniqueness being that no one knew anything about the past of the town. Will his former class fellow be in a position to help him? He thought. The man had a general idea of the area his class fellow lived in. It was almost impossible to look for someone whose name was even not known. Had he been a known figure, it could have been much simpler.
He decided to find him out.
One day he set his sails to start his search. He assumed himself to be Vasco da Gama. He had set sails to discover America and landed in India. Could he also find someone more appropriate than his class fellow? He was lucky. There was not much change in the area and he went up and down the street he thought his friend lived in. But, he was feeling uncomfortable while looking at every house. Also, he had the feeling that his effort won’t go waste.
As soon as this thought hit him, he saw a familiar figure sauntering out from a house. He got excited. Because, he was seeing his only friend in the world after about two decades. There was hardly any change in him whereas he had a little stoop and loss of half hair since he used to have them like a mane. As the friend also recognized him, he invited him in. So, it was peculiar for him. They talked about old times and in between he disclosed the purpose of his visit. He was also as mystified as he had been on discovering the house. Hence, he promised to come over and they decided to set a watch round the clock.
This was the first time that the town had a guest.
They would watch in shifts. One evening when it was his shift, he saw a horde of strange species coming out of the house. Definitely, they were not rodents and unbelievably resembled humans. When he got out of his post they rushed back towards the hole that they were coming out from. However, he managed to catch one. It was miniature of a human. When he put him on his palm, the creature bit him and ran around. The man, horrified and mystified, kept looking at him. It was a complete man, just like him. The creature was shouting. The man could make out whining only. He put him to his ear. “Let me go,” was that he could make out.
It was time for change of shift. His friend reached to take up his duty and looked at this miniature of human being who was male and naked. Now both of them knew that they spoke common language.
“Who are you?”
“Lilliputian.”
As the friend had read Gulliver’s Travels, so was excited at this new discovery.
“Why are you here and how did you reach here?”
“There was a tsunami and we were thrown here.” The man was listening to this conversation in awe.
“Are you real or just a fantasy created by an author?”
“An author created us as his fantasy and then we became real. And, we started living.” The creature laughed it’s heart out. “I am your captive now and my race is in danger of annihilation, but we want to live like all species so how can I be a fantasy?” The friends looked at each other in disbelief that had a tinge of amazement.
“Your race will not get annihilated. We will protect you. So, would you like to continue living here or move to some other place?”
“Some other place where we can develop our craft. Grow crops and develop the land we will live in.”
“Do you have the tools?”
“We will develop them and progress. We should be protected because we are the future.”
Both the friends stared at the creature, frowning.
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(Self-translation from URDU)
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Born on April 19, 1946; Khalid Fateh Muhammad is a renowned and prolific Urdu fiction writer, translator, critic and analyst of Pakistan. He is also known for writing stories of unusual social observation. As he has versatile art of writing, so highly appreciated in the literary circle. Because in his short-stories and novels, he establishes the ideas about social justice, poverty, hunger, thrust, and socio political issues prevalent in the society. Additionally his characters are natural, original and out spoken. Thus, his work got high acclaim from the Urdu critics.
Khalid’s family migrated from Gurdaspur East Punjab and settled in a village of Gujranwala district. While studying in Government College Gujranwala, he joined Pakistan Army. And, after retirement as Major, he settled in Gujranwala Cantt in 1993, and started writing. So far, he has published more than a dozen novels; seven collections of short stories. Furthermore, he has many books of translations from English to Urdu. Also, he publishes a quarterly literary magazine “Adraak”, one of the important Urdu literary journals.
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